Red Lable Hole

Does my creeping solo remix sound good?
This song is by Chamillionaire ft Ludacris
Very tight song
I be creeping creeping while you sleeping (then what)
Spontaneous beepin sound with no speaking
Leakin leakin on the floor
Pop a couple bottles then pop a couple more(what else)
Black clothes black car blackberry chirp(bam)
Random gunfire on to the floor
I run dis s*** like how da bishop run da church
On 2 da 2nd crib after da first
Holy holy creepin freakin
N*g*a*s full of holes bullet wounds leakin
GTA no dis aint a game
Same lame playin terrain mains
On da low low rolling solo
Pop a nig***a once leave him drippin out da rojo(red)
Creepin up ya avenue, friendlys i aint havin u
Im fresh on da mic like a newborn baby
Testify my life like a christian on a lable
Aint finished...still needs some work... Im still getting used to adding rhyme scheme and voice overs
forget wat DZ sed...i like it!!!
Red Label Roor EHLE. active carbon system

